• Mirlotta

    mumbled "she's back..... and she's begging for feedback, AGAIN"

    1 months agoReply
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    (I feel completely technologically inept, but here we go. I think I've figured out how to mumble. Go me.)

    I posted the start of a story I'm writing for my girlfriend before she goes away to uni, and if anyone could give me any feedback I'd be really grateful. I haven't written properly in, like, 2 years (A Levels really took their toll rip), but if a cc swap sweetens the deal, I'll give feedback in return to anyone who wants it?

    MoonboyThis is a story about the son of the moon, and the middle daughter of a very minor star. It should be, at least. Spoilers: it isn't.


    if anyone who remembers me is still knocking about, go ahead and hit me up! or if we've never spoken before and you just want to rant about your life/school/fave tv show, I'm down.

    stay corny, guys :)
    Mirlotta
    1 months ago
    I'll be sure to check it out!
    Rain :)
    1 months ago
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    Thanks ever so much! ♡
    FA Nathaniel Miller USN
    hmmm sure... why not... would be a "Hoot" lol

  • Mirlotta
    9 months agoReply
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    you can tell I'm just getting back into writing in that every chapter is slightly longer
    After Us Comes The Deluge
    After Us Comes The...
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    For the lovers amongst you.
  • Mirlotta
    9 months agoReply
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    Oh my gosh Lily, these are ALL amazing?? I've always remembered you as brilliant at covers but now I'm looking at these and I could genuinely imagine them on a real book you'd pick up at Waterstones <3 Like, damnnn, you're talented :D
    Lily Anna's Covers
    Lily Anna's Covers
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    Well the title is pretty self explanatory... This is a cover store! All covers are made using photos or graphics under the CC0 license (i.e. copyright free/public domain stuff) or are my own ( in that...
    Lily Anna
    9 months ago
    1 Like
    Omg, thank you so much. ���� That genuinely made my night <3
  • Mirlotta

    mumbled "new movella/cc swap/it's been a while/say hi"

    10 months agoReply
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    hey! I just published a new movella and I'm planning on giving the first published chapter as a present to my girlfriend for christmas so cc is appreciated now more than ever before ;) <3 I'd be happy to return any feedback, just ask.
    After Us Comes The DelugeFor the lovers amongst you.


    (side note: it took me an EMBARRASSING amount of time to figure out how to post a mumble at all, this is what ageing looks like)
    (side note side note: if we used to talk, say hi!! if you have no idea who I am, introduce yourself!!)
    The Intelligence Division
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    Not badly at all, thank you :) Uni applications are no fun, so it's good that that's out the way.
    Pocky_Jr☕️
    10 months ago
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    I’m... here? I think? I stumbled back here somehow.
    Hi, hello, hey! It’s Pocky. Been a while, huh?
    Mirlotta
    9 months ago
    Ahhh Pocky!! It's been so long omg, how are you?
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