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Hey, I'm J.K. Panesar, but most people just call me J.K.


Author Of The Year - 2012/13

Bronze award - One Direction Comp

Bronze award - Spooky story contest

Published Poem - Why I smile...

Bronze award - More Than This Competition (Trishna)

Runner Up - 1D and 5SOS Competition

First Place - Salvage Competition (Finding You)

DigiFestUK Fanfic Contest (Dream, Reality & Future)

The Forever Song Illustration Comp - Runner Up

Prequel/Sequel writing competition - Save You {Book 3} Winner

BOTF Youtube/Vine Category - Youtube: Mission of Death (Winner)

  • J.K. Panesar

    mumbled "I'm Back!"


    It's been a while (more like a few years) since I've been active. I first joined this site 7 years ago & OMG it's changed so much since then (and so have I!). I'm going to be graduating this year and starting my masters, but want to get back into my writing! I've unpublished a few books, still going through my works & sorting out my profile. I'm planning to re-write some books & publish some new things too! Looking forward to being more active on Movellas & see what the future brings!

    For now I'm looking forward to what you fabulous Movellians have been writing! Many old faces that I remember have come & gone, but seeing a lot of people that I haven't had the pleasure of meeting! Comment below with a link to your stories and a simple sentence describing what it's about. I will slowly work my way through them and give back as much CC as I can. <3

    Lily Anna
    1 years ago
    I remember you! Welcome back. :)

    Obviously don't feel like you have to read any of my work haha, but if you want to I'll do a little list so you can pick which one you think you would like most.

    Claw Marks and CorridorsFelicity saw something she shouldn't have. A dead girl in the bathroom at school. Not just any girl, Robin Cross, the head girl. Since that night all she's...

    It's kind of a mystery story with some horror/monstery elements in there (man I suck at explaining my own stories haha). It's the first draft so pretty rough right now, but am planning on a rewrite right now actually!

    Lie Like a MagpieMaggie has dyed hair but faking her hair colour isn't the only thing. Her name, her identity, what her parents do for a living; they're all faked too....

    Another mystery thriller story, but with more actiony/spy kind of stuff in it. Also needs editing, but this one is significantly less rough than the one above!

    Blank Out[NaNoWriMo 2018 Draft] "A lot of people spend their lives wishing they could forget all the bad things they did, but when you have no choice but to...

    A mystery story about a girl with anterograde amnesia (meaning she can't make new memories) trying to figure out some of her past. This one I wrote for NaNoWriMo this year. Only up to chapter 6 is uploaded though!

    I mean the blurbs probably give a better idea than my bad descriptions xD But anyway, I also have poetry up on my account if you're more interested in that!

    Hope your graduation goes well and I can't wait to read some of your new work too! :)
    Ms Holly
    1 years ago
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    Hey, welcome back!

    You don't have to check my work out, but if you want to, I have a few.

    Breakout"All Gods are real now," they said. They didn't say they could escape.

    A post-apocalyptic sci-fi story in which the gods of old and new walk the electrified wasteland they created.

    Silence's Voice'Other' fanfiction. Category: AT, or Alternate Timeline. Same universe as canon, but a different point in that universe's history. Just an assassin. Nothi...

    A gaming fanfiction set in the centre of a shady cult of cutthroats.
  • J.K. Panesar
    Your blurb is very interesting, made me want to continue reading. I would say sometimes your sentences could be made simpler so that it roles of the tongue more easier. Well done with the show not tell aspect of it. :)

    I like your description in your first paragraph, however there are some sentences that don't really need to be there and act as fillers. An example of this would be where you say 'not expecting the children to do anything too bad'. Without it, we would know that nothing drastic is going to happen either way.

    Although I like how you have separated what the kids are doing into grades, it does seem a little bit unnecessary . You could describe what is going on in the playground without tagging your character to a particular grade. This could prove to be more flexible later on in the story.

    The part where is says 'A young girl observed...' should be a new paragraph.

    ' "Yeah" her friend responded' the word does not exactly the tone of how she responded. Was it irritable or did she shout or did she mumble it?

    I would recommend reading it aloud to yourself and see if some sentences could be re-written to sound better? Overall, I really like the first chapter of your movella... I really hope that Dell is okay and I look forward to an update. :)
    The Puppet
    The Puppet
    "There are bad people in this world." She nodded along to the familiar phrase. "Ok." She'd mutter, knowing there wasn't a reason why. It was just an excuse for her mom to not let her go outside and play....
    5 years ago
    Thanks so much for the review. I am currently working on chapter two, but I'm also beginning another project because my mind throws me ideas and I just go with it, so it might be a while, but your review definitely makes me want to continue. However if you want Dell to live happily ever after, I suggest you just assume she does and not read any of the other chapters because this will not be a light story. But an update is coming eventually.
  • J.K. Panesar

    mumbled "Well then..."

    I may not Movellas as much in the next few months. I have recently applied for several universities and am in the process of getting my portfolios ready and going to interviews. I have applied for Oxford University and I am completely nervous because there interviews take place before everyone else's and oh my gosh... I don't even want to think about it. Alongside that uni stuff I have my college briefs to be completing and so on. As soon as all that passes, I have a few stories in mind that I am looking forward to write and the first place I will be putting them up is here. So I guess bye for now (although I will be logging in then and again, but activity will be low).

    ~ J.K. Panesar
    J.K. Panesar
    5 years ago
    Thank you!
    Sapphire Silver Moon
    Your welcome
    2 years ago
    can u please update the 3 book of only you
  • J.K. Panesar
    Awh Molly, please don't feel so rough. You're going through a rough patch, but once you get through it many positive things can happen. :) Just know im here if you need someone to talk too, okay? Hope you are feeling loads better and smile! XD
    Don't Grow Up It's A Trap
    Don't Grow Up It's...
    *DIARY* A certain Rouge challenged me to something of a diary-off. I'm already losing but who cares? Let battle commence.
  • J.K. Panesar
    I found out about Movellas through my old English teacher. She wanted me to expand on my writing skills as she believed that I had a hidden talent and told me to enter the Valentine's Poetry competition that was on at the time. I didn't win and I didn't mind because this site had so much more to offer and over three years in the running I am still here. :)
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    Man, I wish our English Teachers knew about Movellas XD
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