Neutral genderUnited StatesMember since 17 Feb 18Age 18Last online 2 years ago

Hi I'm Jack. This is a new account to separate my newer work from my older stories. My old account is still up, but inactive. I'm queer and nonbinary (they/them pronouns). I love Stargate if anyone's heard of that show (I'm guessing you haven't). I compete in Original Spoken Word (slam poetry) on my school's speech & debate team with my best friend. Mostly I write sci-fi and paranormal stories.

Please send me gay stories. Those are my favorite to review.
(anything under the LGBT+ umbrella is appreciated)

My contact email is

  • Jackson Summer
    1 Like
    This is a phenomenal piece of work, Molly. I love the way you craft your characters. They feel so real, and Iris has such strong emotions, even I was crying at a certain point. The ending felt a bit rushed which was a little disappointing after all of the momentum the story carried; however, I think you wonderful job of showing how Iris changed from the beginning to the end. I look forward to reading whatever story you write next!
    Iris Hale: HUNTER *NaNoWriMo Draft 2016*
    Iris Hale: HUNTER...
    *NaNoWriMo 2016*/ Periliares are a crafty bunch. You might know them as 'demons'. They hate that word. The idea that all of them are evil is idiotic. The same way all humans aren't evil, not all periliares...
    Molly Looby
    2 years ago
    Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I love Iris. She was so much fun to write!

    And I agree about the ending. I'm actively looking for recommendations for what to do about it. The reason it's rushed is because I hated it even while I was writing it! Just not sure how to fix it!
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