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I Don't Know What These Are

by , Friday November 2, 2018
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 I Don't Know What These Are

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  • John Bryan

    mumbled "I made It"

    8 months agoReply
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    Some years ago I made this trailer to my story and I just found it in the cloud, I'd forgotten I'd made it or that I had uploaded it. Now I've attached it to the story now as well.

    Maybe one day I will try making a new one.

  • John Bryan

    mumbled "Nibbled"

    1 years agoReply
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    Part 37
    I have once again nibbled at the opening chapter of my story Demon Hunter, I have cut out the first few paragraphs shortening what was already a short chapter to get rid of what I feel was a load of exposition and instead cut straight to the heart of that beginning, whether or not the changes are an improvement I'm not sure but I've done it now and probably won't undo it.
    Mister Tea
    1 years ago
    Hello if you ever see it can you tell me what you think of this trailer I made
  • John Bryan
    1 years agoReply
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    Yes this is nice, a really good start.
    Entering Emotion
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    Do I really have the opportunity to begin to feel emotions, other than sad and dismal maybe even on a good day dull. How I wish Love could become part of my daily routine.
  • John Bryan

    mumbled "How Many is too Many"

    1 years agoReply

    I don't know how anyone else feels about it, but looking at this photo of Adam Levine frontman of Maroon 5 this is my personal opinion I think he has too many tattoos.

    Yes I know it's all a matter of personal taste, I get that but I don't get why he needs that many.

    Which brings me to my question, how many is too many?
    Mister Tea
    1 years ago
    More than two is too much if you ask me.
  • John Bryan
    1 years agoReply
    This is cool and a great start to an intriguing story, I look forward to reading more.

    One issue I'm not sure about the font change. Is it intentional, on more than one occasion I've published chapters and found afterwards that paragraphs had different fonts for some reason.

    If it is a choice I think it should start with the paragraph after Penelope was going to die as unless I'm reading it wrong that is when it shifts to Azazel's perspective.

    Anyway the story styling choices are obviously entirely up to you and as I say it's a great start to a story.
    The Lone Path
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    One of the most misunderstood and stigmatized entities in modern day culture, is the Grim Reaper but the Reaper isn't evil, the Reaper is simply doing the job that was predestined for him. A chance...
    Victoria Wethers
    the font change was accidental, thanks for reading though!
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