FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 28 Jul 14Last online 4 years ago

Lilianna is my name. My nickname is blue.

  • Lilianna Styles
    Beautiful description. I like how that your grammar is acceptable, and even though this is a one direction story, you still show the character feelings quite well. I love your prologue, it is just beautiful. I have to also say that I am team Carry, though I am also team Ciall. Nice story, lovely plot. Your vocabulary is really good, and you make the story seem realistic, and the characters are very realistic too. Also, I love Chloe, she is a strong, cool character, but I also love how you make her seem vulnerable too. Keep writing. Great story.
    Save Me
    Save Me
    Chloe Shell hasn't had the best of life. Since, her mother dying in a car accident when she was younger, and then her fiancé running away on their wedding day. Chloe has just about given up on love. But,...
    5 years ago
    I love the prologue too. I am team Carry, but glad to see a few team Ciall as well. Chloe is a very independent and strong character, but I do have to agree she is quite vulnerable as well, and wants to appear more stronger than she is. Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreciate your feedback.
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